That piece from Bozich yesterday was a total embarrassment and letting him publish that revised version as if we hadn't all seen the original was even worse.
I just can't imagine how 1) anyone older than 13 and living post-1960 would write it and 2) how any editorial staff in the world lets it through. I realize you want to hit on the breaking news and get it out quickly, but you don't publish that if a single other person has taken a look at it.
You could literally replace Bozich with just about any name in journalism today and it would apply. This article was up there as well. It’s a shame what’s happened to real journalism.